OCR · GCSE · English Literature · Higher
An unexpected development
Section A - Modern prose or drama. Animal Farm by George Orwell and Blacklands by Belinda Bauer. Part b) asks about another moment in the studied text.
Explore another moment in Animal Farm in which there is an unexpected development.
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Marking points
- 1 Selects a relevant unexpected development from Animal Farm.
- 2 Develops interpretation with textual reference.
- 3 Analyses language, form or structure.
Why this answer loses marks
Something unexpected happens when the pigs take over.
This is not a focused development and it does not explain Orwell's method or why the event matters.