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OCR · GCSE · English Literature · Higher

A young person's viewpoint

Q03.1a 20 marks
Question 3 printed poems page 8

Question 3 printed poems page 8

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Question 3 printed poems page 8
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Compare how these poems present a young person's viewpoint.

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Marking points

  1. 1 Compares both poems' presentation of a young person's viewpoint.
  2. 2 Addresses ideas/attitudes, tone/atmosphere, and effects of language and structure.

Why this answer loses marks

Both speakers are young, so the poems present the same happy viewpoint.

This flattens the comparison and does not analyse voice, structure or imagery to explain the different viewpoints.