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Fighting between the Montagues and the Capulets
How does Shakespeare present fighting between the Montagues and the Capulets? Explore at least two moments from the play to support your ideas.
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What a strong answer needs
- 1 task focus
- 2 two moments
- 3 methods
- 4 context
- 5 clear writing
Why this answer loses marks
Using the Prologue alone as one of the two required moments.
The examiner report notes that this often led to stilted commentary; stronger answers analyse dynamic dramatic fighting scenes.